This post will discuss about my progress and achievement for the pass 2 assignments; Argumentative Essay and Debate. The argumentative essay that I wrote was about cars in Indonesia. From what Ms.H reviewed, my essay has many grammatical mistakes which made some of the sentences confusing. The good side is, my format and thesis statement was good :D, I should really thank you Ms.H for checking my thesis statement :D. For the next essay or any other written assignments, I will recheck or proofread my essay before handing it in.
The debate assignment was pretty fun but nerve wrecking. The pressure made me stutter and forgot about my notes. There was a part when I pause for a long time because I forgot about a statement I wanted to say. From that point, I thought that I will definitely get the lowest score but instead it was pretty good (YES I'M SAFE!). I should really thank my group members; David, Paritosh and James to do the debate together. For the next debate, I will try to be more calm and collected so I can deliver my arguments smoothly.
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